Green Monkey

I like this piece and think its good. But why is it under the narrarative poetry section? I think its great and all but I just don't know why it's ...

I guess you didn't read the part where it said it was acrostic then....

Ummm... I'd rather go to Australia, cause a YWS member named Kite is really cool and he lives there!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Well, let's see here... Your writing is very good and displays unique skill. I wish I could write more detailed as you seem to. But then again, everyone writes more ...

You're story is good, though too crunched up in that small space. Some spaces between paragraphs, perhaps? ;)

Cool... Well written. But you spelt Pity wrong! Also, it seemed kind of short. It needs more in order to be a pley (at least thats what i think!). :):):):)

Like Firestarter, the fact 'by' is on the next line makes it sound off. But other then that, its really good and belongs in the dramatic poetry forum. :)

Umm... Though I am slightly confused, your story has unique qualities...

Sweet Dude! I like your story... As always... Its detailed and intricate... Keep up the good work.